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Daddy Goose38
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0 posted 2011-02-08 06:40 PM




Freezing Kansas


Not bleeding Kansas
But freezing Kansas,
But whether it be summer or winter,
Whether through rain, or snow or dark of night,
The sun is always shining there.
(could someone draw a sunburst around this poem?
I don’t know how to do that)


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-02-08 06:51 PM


Ahh, best I can do. I've been to Kansas and you are right, the sun shines a lot.

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2 posted 2011-02-08 07:02 PM


Ah, my fine friend...
Would that you could see the starburst
around Jerry's response. You would be
smiling big, my friend.

And an early Happy Birthday to you!




Daddy Goose38
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3 posted 2011-02-08 07:28 PM


Well this was written for SS.
And now I think that explains the apparent jibberish bin Jerrypat's poem, which my screen reader tries to resove into words.

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4 posted 2011-02-08 07:35 PM


It's all good, Daddy Goose....

All good.

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-02-08 08:00 PM


Sorry man. I didn't understand where you was coming from."

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

Daddy Goose38
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6 posted 2011-02-08 09:23 PM


Thanks for Jerrypat posting the image.
My screne reader usually ignores pictures, though I knew this would happen. Funs

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