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Open Poetry #47

Smiling Moon

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2011-02-06 08:45 PM

One star in this night
As I enter the light
In the gaze of a smiling moon
One road do I see
The path in front of me
As I follow
The smiling moon
A journey awaits
A mission In place
With the guide
Of a smiling moon
So soon I'll enjoy
The comfort employ
Of you
And the smiling moon

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2011-02-06 10:24 PM

I loved this.

It occurs to me that a smiling or frowning moon is a matter of geographical perspective.

Good to read you again, lovie. Well done.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

2 posted 2011-02-06 10:59 PM

This is such a sweet poem. I loved the imagery. I truly enjoyed the read.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2011-02-06 11:16 PM

I like it when the moon smiles, it's then I tend to notice it and remember.

Good work!

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

sweetcheeks639
Junior Member

since 2011-02-17

Posts 19

4 posted 2011-02-19 07:31 PM

that moon must have been guiding you somewher special..lots of feeling in this..love it

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-02-19 07:40 PM

a smiling moon...i love the image that paints in my mind...your poem is lovely

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

6 posted 2011-02-22 01:15 AM

Thank you all feel good to post again

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