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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-02-06 12:40 PM

The fall season is sad to me,
No joy found in the cooling breeze,
Leaves fall to ground give me no glee.
I think of love's many degrees.
A young love that blooms in the spring,
Grows and thrives in summertime sun,
Everything perfect for queen and king,
But autumn find love almost done.
All that's left is winter's cold chill,
To shatter love's bough to the quick.
Leaving lovers to pay the bill,
And dismantle love brick by brick.
Spring awaits the fair maiden's thoughts,
Will love return or will it naught.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-02-06 02:44 PM

Ah, the mysteries of life.

Now, if I could only find my crystal ball!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-02-06 02:59 PM

My crystal ball has turned cloudy and will not cooperate. Thanks, Sunshine.

~ Some people are like a Slinky-not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-02-06 04:08 PM

...and the seasons go 'round and 'round~~~

Nicely done, JP~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2011-02-06 04:17 PM

Fall and Winter are perfect seasons for lovers, all the cuddling and stuff ha. but it can be a cold killer for the lonely. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-02-06 04:18 PM

Thank you, Blues, I appreciate your nice comment.

~ Some people are like a Slinky-not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-02-06 04:47 PM

"all the cuddling and stuff"

You are so right about that above, Trina, and especially correct about the lonely. I have tasted both as most people have.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-02-07 09:04 AM

Liked this Jerry. At the end I had an image of a maiden with a daisey "He loves me, he loves me not..."
Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-02-07 09:43 AM

That image you had of the maiden counting daisy's was the correct one, Lori. Thanks for being here . . . Always.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

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