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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
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New Jersey

0 posted 2011-02-06 03:01 AM


So, maybe I’m the only one who laughs at my jokes,
but at least I’m smiling.

Maybe I don’t look like a supermodel when my clothes come off,
but at least I’m comfortable with my self-image.

Maybe I’m not a prodigy in the classroom,
but at least I can sustain an intelligent conversation.

Maybe I won’t sleep with you the first night,
but at least I have morals.

Maybe profanity never seeps from my lips,
but at least I speak with some class.

Maybe I don’t play many sports,
but at least I’ll attempt any and be able to laugh at my amateurism.

Maybe drugs aren’t fun to me,
but at least I’m high on life.

Maybe I don’t always know what advice to give,
but at least I’m genuinely listening.

Maybe I believe some things that I should not,
but at least I don’t have trust issues.

Maybe I do some “stupid” things,
but at least I’m open-minded.

Maybe I make mistakes multiple times,
but at least I eventually learn something from them.

Maybe I’m not your dream girl…
but at least I realize this is reality.


*Amber

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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-02-06 10:59 AM


I love your conviction, and your attitude, not to mention your reality.

Perfect!!!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-02-06 03:09 PM


In other words, Amberzlynnc, you are YOU. In that regard you are much better off than probably the majority of the people you come into contact with. Stay where you are, make them come to you. That is a winning plan.

~ Some people are like a Slinky-not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-02-06 09:15 PM


the sad reality is that few folks are comfortable in their own skins...a deep & wise write...nicely done...thank you for sharing
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2011-02-06 11:44 PM


Many common sense pearls of wisdom in this piece.
Great self examination with a positive outlook.

Good work!

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

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