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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
To exist for vendetta and material power alone is to risk terrible heartbreak. I left the followers behind and took an early morning walk, my first good ramble of this kind in many months, to talk with God. Between fog-dripping, silent oaks, all clustered far with owlet calls and memories of ev'ning croaks, I made my way beyond the walls. Into a misty morn at last, beyond the sleep-gray tempered dunes that guard a sandy, sordid past, the work of many moons I trod. Where formless skies meet formless sand, and dark ocean between is sown, what foot and disk and eye make--- To exist for vendetta and material power alone is to risk terrible heartbreak. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
a profound and powerful piece finely penned...enjoyed it much  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice write...liked these phrasings best: "Between fog-dripping, silent oaks, all clustered far with owlet calls " |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A soul searching kind of poem with a great message. Good thoughts, excellent poetry~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
This is a nice read -Juju |
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