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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-02-04 02:17 PM

Behold the Prism
That I am
Choose your color
In my vision
Do not be distracted
By rainbows
I have thrown
My light
Is only refracted
It is not
My own

(repost)

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-02-04 02:19 PM

short and sweet but well contructed...another wonderful one, Lori

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-02-04 02:21 PM

Thanks Faith, I apreciate you being here.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-02-04 02:26 PM

you are very welcome...you are also one of my favorite poets here...i love your work!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-02-04 02:36 PM

Faith, I am truely humbled by your comment, you are very generous. thank you. Lori

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-02-04 02:42 PM

Excellent, Lori. Enjoy your work.
Ida

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2011-02-04 02:47 PM

Thanks Ida, I'm glad you do.
Lori

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2011-02-04 04:31 PM

thank you for re-posting this....nice, tight write that says a lot...well done

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

8 posted 2011-02-04 04:48 PM

Whoa!! LOVED this masterpiece of subterfuge.

A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks.

paderewski
Member

since 2011-02-04

Posts 287
Louisiana, USA

9 posted 2011-02-04 10:29 PM

This is kind of sad. Like a prison within yourself. I hope it isn't real, and merely a poem , but it feels real and that is a tribute to your talent.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2011-02-09 06:59 PM

Now, you're in my room...where prisms are key!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2011-02-09 07:13 PM

A prism is a good thing to be, Lori, it is pleasing to look at, a calming influence I have always found, and beside that they are beautiful. You fit all the requirements of the prism.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

12 posted 2011-02-10 11:44 AM

Steaven-I'm glad you liked this one, it is kinda special to me.
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LegIsee-Thanks for the comment!
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paderewski-sorry you interpreted it as sad, my intent was to say that the light of God shines through me and my gifts are from that light.
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the view from your window is delightful Sunshine.

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Jerry you are too sweet, thank you.

Lori

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