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DrinaLove
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since 2010-12-23
Posts 30
California

0 posted 2011-02-04 06:06 AM



Letting loose, trying but I couldn’t
Attached, hinged, screwed tight
The driver came from behind, unexpected unscrewed
Loose, finalized thoughts of someone who’s been through too much
Never enough, life keeps blazing it towards, straight at
Hold on to me, let us magnetize and reunite, although it’s our first time
Understand the feelings, emotions, thoughts, words, and expressions
Might not make sense, not all at once, analyze
My thoughts of us are deeper then hearts
My love for u is more than “he loves me, he loves me not”
I’m well aware of the danger ahead, letting loose it’s not something I do
Screw me together, loose is not safe, not safe when you’re away
Attach me to your side, feelings coming back
Not just a woman, please don’t forget
A loose screw trying to find my way back, my nature
My habitat, my world, Love, I call
Not just a woman, not all that I am
Human is what I’m described as, in need and in offering
Love of not just a woman, but human love
Screw it right, screw us

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latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
1 posted 2011-02-04 03:15 PM


DrinaLove, welcome! I saw your work posted and falling down the line. There are so many people posting that we often do not see a post until it has passed on.Don't give up on PIP

Your poem sounds deep and low. I hope all is well with you.
best to you, latearrival

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