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Open Poetry #47

a part of me

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-03 08:52 PM

Women bleed while
men eat ice cream
and other things
to get over someone
crying takes the
sharp edge off the pain
for a while warding
off the numbness
knowing all the while
it is futile and
foolish for me to think
i could ever really
get over losing you
who was and always will be
such a part of me.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2011-02-03 08:55 PM

This is such a beautiful poem. I could feel the sadness as I read each word. Eventually you will forget the guy.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-03 09:04 PM

thank you so much for your lovely comments...i always enjoy reading what you write

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2011-02-03 09:19 PM

"men eat ice cream / and other things"

Hahahahahahaha!

Sorry. Just couldn't help it, Faith.

It is a sad poetical piece of work, but if you can't laugh at something sometimes it will devour you.

~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-02-03 09:30 PM

yep, i can see the humor in that....hahahaha

thanks for sharing that

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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