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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Look deep into my eyes past my disguise to the molten core of who I am Take down my hair and let it fall like silk upon our skin And then touch me there beyond the pretence of how I try to be Touch me there And set me free LGR(C)2/3/11 |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
"Take the ribbon from my hair, take it off and let it fall." That was a pretty song, and so is this poem, Lori. You managed to keep withing the boundaries of polite society and still got a bit risque. Gotta love it. ~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jerry, I'm happy you thought it was pretty. Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Lori-You have such a wonderful way with words...love how genuine your poetry is  Great poem! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sizzle, sizzle, hotch-O-T and to think...this is 'polite society' nice write...enjoyed |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Faith, I don't think I have heard anyone use the word genuine to describe my poetry before. I take that as quite a complement, thank you very much! -------------------------------------------- Steaven, glad you enjoyed! Lori |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Playful teases and gentle hugs Lori! Jaime |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Very nice Lori, Ms. E |
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