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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2011-02-01 11:13 PM


Approach me from across the floor
Blast me strait to hell
Let me say hey
My heart was beating
Well lived
Im just like you
Can you be my friend
I want to know what i have done
Dont make me feel alone
Did i ever want to get up
This was a hopeless fight
Let it all loose
It goes to show
Im just liked you
I want you to be home

© Copyright 2011 Jared Copeland - All Rights Reserved
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
1 posted 2011-02-01 11:16 PM


This is an awesome poem. I could feel your feelings in these words. I enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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