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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2011-02-01 11:28 AM



Thinking of today
And what it means
To have you by my side
Even in my dreams

A taste of excitement
Fills the moist air
Brings peace to my world
Even in times of despair

A soul such as yours
Seems so hard to find
But today I can hope
That you'll share yours,
With mine

So as today goes on for you
In a place I cannot physically be
Remember, I'm in the air
For only you,

To breathe........

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2011-02-01 11:36 AM


Nothing like laying it all out on the table about how you feel, or in this case writing a poem about it. I bet she liked this one.

~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-02-01 12:08 PM


don't see anyway she could do anything but love it! excellent.
Lori

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