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Ultima1221
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since 2011-01-31
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0 posted 2011-01-31 08:49 PM



There are so many words to explain my love for you
I only hope I can make you feel the way I do.
For you, have made me feel things i cant describe
Your heart i shall look upon, and my name i shall inscribe
I would do anything for you, my love
you have given me something, i shall never want to get rid of.
If you give me your heart. I shall give you my soul.
For Rylee, you have made my life whole.
When your not with me, I am lifeless
And i will never want to look upon thee, and Dispossess.
Me and you, shall go through this dance of life.
And someday, I would like to make you my wife.
You put my life into another abyss
For my love for you is endless.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-01-31 09:10 PM


This sounds sincere. I wish you well.

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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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2 posted 2011-01-31 09:16 PM


First of all, welcome aboard!

Your poem was very romantic and I really enjoyed it.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
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3 posted 2011-01-31 09:23 PM


Welcome to PiP.

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steavenr
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4 posted 2011-01-31 09:30 PM


welcome...enjoyed your passionate write
katahdin
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5 posted 2011-02-01 12:21 PM


Welcome to PIP, nice first post!
Kat >^..^<

To live is to love
To love is to live

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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6 posted 2011-02-01 08:30 AM


a very nice dance of permanence and love
enduring

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