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Open Poetry #47

i miss you mostly

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-29 11:34 PM

i miss you mostly
in the morning
when i realize
i've still another day
to face wihout you

sometimes, i miss you
in the late afternoon
when you'd call
and say we'd
spend the weekend together

and then i miss you
in the evening
when losing you
hurts the worst
and i go to sleep alone

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-30 06:40 AM

Good morning, Faith. Hearts, it seems are made to be manipulated and broken.

~ I might be in favor of national healthcare if it required all Democrats to get their heads examined. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-01-30 12:35 PM

Good afternoon, JerryPat. Thanks for your comments. So true it seems!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-01-30 02:32 PM

an episodic tribute to angst...so very well done

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2011-01-30 06:43 PM

Missing someone is thought to be the purest of pain. You render that pain beautifully.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2011-01-30 08:12 PM

Fine writing...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2011-01-30 08:46 PM

This is very sad and lonely but you put the feelings across very well.

Eric

the assured expectation of things hoped for, the evident demonstration of reality though not beheld

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-01-31 09:18 PM

thank you all so much for your wonderful remarks

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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