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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2011-01-29 11:58 AM


She trumpets her jazz to a gardeners' ear,
majestic in form from her towering stem.
The Belle of the Ball, made emphatically clear,
wears extravagant blooms like a cluster of gems.

Standing tall, regal, proud 'bove her subjects below,
royalty rising up with her crown in bright glow.
Just a memory now in contrast to the snow,
this blank white-wash of winter outside these windows.

Amaryllis, the gardens are awaiting their queen
'neath this frozen expanse, in the kingdom of green.

© Copyright 2011 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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1 posted 2011-01-29 01:20 PM


Nicely stated here Doc. Reminds me of my mother's garden. Hope the new year is treating you well. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2011-01-29 01:56 PM


Drew ol' buddy, the same to you and yours, & many thanks for your comments. Balladeer was rubbing it in about being on the beach and got me to thinking I could use a breath of spring, lol.
Doc

ethome
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3 posted 2011-01-29 06:37 PM


Oh man, let's get that Queen where she delightfully belongs. We'll all be much happier.

Hooray for the kingdom of green!!

Eric

the assured expectation of things hoped for, the evident demonstration of reality though not beheld

steavenr
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4 posted 2011-01-29 09:35 PM


wonderful painting you have mastered here...probably more so for those in snow-drenched climes...good write
Balladeer
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5 posted 2011-01-29 09:58 PM


You had me at "She trumpets..", Doc. Love your humor but, when you turn over a serious leaf (pun intended), there's no one better.

Nice work!

faithmairee
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6 posted 2011-01-30 12:37 PM


very beautifully done...i enjoyed it!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 2011-01-30 09:01 AM


Eric,
Thanks, as much as I enjoy the changing seasons, there are times I wish certain ones would change a little faster, lol.

Doc

steavenr,
Thank you,"a picture" as they say, though I've managed to trim it down to 82 here.

Doc

Balladeer,
Lol @ your reply, you are much too kind, sir. Once, many years ago, I stood in that exact spot, or by an identical sign, and enjoyed some of Fort Lauderdales' southern hospitality, your picture sure brought back some memories.

Doc

faithmairee,
Thank you so much.

Doc

serenity
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8 posted 2011-01-30 06:51 PM


So lovely, I can just picture the it.
Thank you for the pleasure of being able to read this.

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2011-01-30 08:11 PM


Nice...James
OwlSA
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10 posted 2011-02-02 01:39 PM


Beautiful, especially that first line!

Owl

Dr.Moose1
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11 posted 2011-02-03 06:38 AM


serenity,
Thank you for saying so.
Doc

JamesMichael,
Thanks.
Doc

Owl,
That's very kind of you to say.
Doc

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