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Balladeer
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0 posted 2011-01-29 08:54 AM



..to the tune of....aw, you know
.
.
Oh, the weather is bright and sunny
And, though you may think it's funny
I prefer when it's 10 below
I love snow! I love snow! I love snow!

There is something that's quite appeasin'
When extremities start freezin'
And the blood is too cold to flow..
I love snow! I love snow! I love snow!

Sun can give your whole face red tint
Causes cancer all over your skin.
When you open your eyes you squint
Living like this is a sin!


I am sure when you read this ditty
That your heart will fill with pity.
It's a heart-wrenching tale of woe.
I love snow! I love snow! I love snow!
.



© Copyright 2011 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Gunslinger
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1 posted 2011-01-29 09:35 AM


I love it, Michael. And the snowy backdrop to the poem says it all. lol
JerryPat
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2 posted 2011-01-29 10:35 AM


Hahahahahahahahaha! I lived in New York City and Cheyenne, Wyoming and Denver, just touching bases where there was a LOT of snow. I have had quite enough, thank you, south Louisiana suits me just fine. Nice rendition of the old song.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-01-29 10:44 AM


'deer you are such a tease (nice knees) We are having a pre artic blast heat wave in the 50's here. lot's of mud, lot's of mud, lot's of mud!
Lori

Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2011-01-29 11:31 AM


Balladeer,
I'll send you some, it's snowing as I write this, and a balmy 28, which after the sub temps of last week feels like beach weather.
Doc

ethome
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5 posted 2011-01-29 11:40 AM


Oh man you're dirty when you're drinkin!

He he I'm only jealous!

Let it rain let it rain let it rain....Aw heck, I don't mean that have a great time!!

Eric

the assured expectation of things hoped for, the evident demonstration of reality though not beheld

faithmairee
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6 posted 2011-01-29 01:13 PM


love, love, love it...very entertaining!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

amk377
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7 posted 2011-01-29 01:19 PM


I loved it!!
always4real
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8 posted 2011-01-29 01:22 PM


Thanks for the read, made me smile! I too love the snow, as long as I don't have to drive in it

"Happiness is a state of your own mind!"

Andrew Scott
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9 posted 2011-01-29 01:25 PM


Ha, looks a lot like my neck of the woods... sunny So. Cal.... only the beach is on the other side of the picture. Maybe somebody will send you some snow in the mail. Hope the new year is treating you well. Peace my friend.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2011-01-29 01:56 PM


    

We Gots SNOW!!!  today's pic (front view)


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11 posted 2011-01-29 02:27 PM




to continue on your rendition:


I'll think of you when it's lightnin'
as hurricanes are so a-fright'ning...
at least I can build me a man
in the snow, in the snow...not the sand...




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12 posted 2011-01-29 04:21 PM


hehe...thank you all for joining in the fun...in reality, I sympathize with all of you. Maureen.....ouch!

Lori...you really think I have nice knees? Tell me more!!!

Sunshine...

Oh, yes, Karilea, I know
You can build you a man out of snow
But you'll wake up one sunny dawn
To find that you lover is gone!

Use the sand and you'll find it better
And you'll see that it's better when wetter.
Kiss your snowman a warm goodbye
Sand will make you an excellent guy!



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13 posted 2011-01-29 04:34 PM


I understand it's even cold on Alabama. Toerag sent me a pic of him at the nudist colony where he works....
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14 posted 2011-01-29 07:50 PM


'Deer darling man this is absolutely brilliant, yet you are soooo very bad, particularly when I'm feeling like this. I'll swap you, you have our weather and we can have yours. Perhaps a little bit of sun will bake this 'flu out of me.  
I've got the 'flu and I can't stop sneezing
And a high temp yet I'm still freezing
My head aches, my throat's sore as can be
Take this cold far away from me

My temperature is climbing higher
And I'm hallucinating I've found a buyer
Though my writing is not that fine
This 'flu has gone way over line

My nose is constantly dripping
And I overflow with the syrup I'm sipping
Let me overdose on these meds pretty please
Just so I no longer sneeze

I've a drum thumping in my head
My skin's pale and my eyes are red
This 'flu has sorrows still to reap
Oh please go and let me sleep.

Marsha

Sending Mushy thanks
Love  and warm mushy stuff
As always
Mushy
X x x x x x x x  

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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15 posted 2011-01-29 08:51 PM


I'm here, mushy, I'm here!


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16 posted 2011-01-29 09:44 PM


Wow, Mushy!! You DO have it bad. Sorry you are going through all that....but at least you are doing it poetically!
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17 posted 2011-01-29 11:21 PM


it was 70 here today...what a strange winter.

It will be back down to the teens soon enough, and more snow.

Funny how I thought of the beach today, and then this. The picture made me homesick but I suppose what's done is done.

Been thinking about the west coast but it would never hold a candle to Florida.

thanks for some good memories tonight Deer

Nan
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18 posted 2011-01-30 11:52 AM


I've sent some - Special delivery..
Oklahoma Rose
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19 posted 2011-01-31 10:55 PM


Hey Balladeer, I will gladly give you all of mine. I love to share.
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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20 posted 2011-01-31 10:59 PM


LMAO I was expecting to see a picture of snow. LOL It is of a sandy beach in Florida instead. I am literally rollin'.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


Marchmadness
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21 posted 2011-02-01 03:26 AM


Ha ha ha! Very clever. Makes me appreciate So. Cal.
                   Ida

Martie
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22 posted 2011-02-01 05:28 PM


Thanks for the smile, Mike....How do you feel about fog??
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23 posted 2011-02-01 05:41 PM


Methinks you'd better duck--our Northern friends seem to be a lot less amused this week.

I'm gonna go mind my own karma.

(cute replies too)

love the white socks, too. Tide?

*laughing*

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24 posted 2011-02-01 08:40 PM


How do I feel about fog? Since I've walked around in it most of my life, I guess I like it!


White is the official sock color of Florida. Tides in - dirt's out!

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25 posted 2011-02-02 06:14 AM


Mike, you make me laugh with your last response

So witty!



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26 posted 2011-02-02 08:51 AM


Good! I love your smile, Maureen!
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27 posted 2011-02-03 05:54 PM


I love snow  and your poem..must be nice down there. My family wish for warmth since i asked for more snow(which we got a foot and 3 inchs) Their telling me to stop asking for snow..which i stopped for now. I wil always love snow and your poems. Have fun in the sun.
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28 posted 2011-02-03 06:32 PM


Thanks, Ken. Snow is the only way to go.......far away from!  
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