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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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0 posted 2011-01-28 12:35 PM



can you hear me, Lord
when i cry
sometimes, i feel like
i could die
my cross is heavy
my path dark
the wounds i carry
leave their mark

can you hear me, Lord
when i cry
i am not hard yet
by and by
i wonder if you
hear me, Lord
sometimes, i do
cry to you

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2011-01-28 03:00 PM


Reaching out to the deity is a comfort for some. Most of the time I fear He lets us muddle through our difficulties as best we can. And sometimes maybe that is the best.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
2 posted 2011-01-29 01:27 PM


thank you as always for your comments...i appreciate them

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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