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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2011-01-27 10:39 PM



I guess I'm big and ugly
At least so I've been told
I was never much to look at
Much less as I grow old.
But a book is not the cover
which may be stained and worn
Nor even in the pages-
which may be frayed and torn-
The value is the content
The words and works of art
And the value of a person
Are the things within his heart.
If a man can see the beauty
In a rushing mountain stream
Or see the mightly grandeur
Of Old Faithful, with it's steam
Or look into the careworn
Features of a maid-
Whose heart has oft been broken
And confidence betrayed...
and see beneath the heartache
The sorrow and the grief
And see the lovely virgin
Who's hidden underneath.
Or look upon the street kids
Their swagger and their pride
Which hide the insecurities
They really feel inside
And see the little boy
Who cries himself to sleep
And have the tender feelings...
Himself to go and weep.
Lean against the cell bars
And cast his glance inside
Upon a hopeless prisoner
A man condemned to die
And own him as a brother
A confidant and friend-
And be content his life and time
With such a man to spend-
If these things be your nature
And years and miles they span
Be sure that when your journey ends
At least you'll die a man.

© Copyright 2011 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2011-01-27 10:44 PM


I like your style!

"And the value of a person
are the things within his heart"

Loved thoes lines, enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
2 posted 2011-01-27 10:49 PM


This is very beautifully written. I agree with every word here. Much truth you have written.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


Amberzlynnc
Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229
New Jersey
3 posted 2011-01-28 02:59 AM


Wow..
This was so easy to follow, it read smoothly and everything worked perfectly. Beautiful poem, beautifully written. Thank you!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2011-01-28 10:29 AM


Big, you may be, John, - but ugly, most definitely not!  Whoever told you that was either jealous or needed glasses!  I loved the rest of your poem – beautiful, sensitive, wise, mature and compassionate and a pleasure to read.  

Owl

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2011-01-28 04:42 PM


The value is the content
The words and works of art
And the value of a person
Are the things within his heart.

~*~

John, I've been called "ugly", as well.
I guess it will always be in the eye of
the believer.




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