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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
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Florida, USA

0 posted 2011-01-27 10:28 PM


Laying here on top of your grave
Crying for reasons unknown to me
Missing you Grandma tremendously
Wasn't there when you passed
When you needed me the most
Great feelings of regret
Even though one day I know
God will bring you back from the dead
so I can see you again
Which is the only thing that
keeps me from crying
nowadays

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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1 posted 2011-01-29 01:00 AM


Such beautiful, heart-breaking words. I'm sure she knew you love her and knows it still.
May God give you peace.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2011-01-29 01:03 AM


Lovely heart felt tribute to your Grandma.
The sincerity just ebbs out through the words.

Eric

the assured expectation of things hoped for, the evident demonstration of reality though not beheld

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2011-01-29 05:36 AM


Julie, I know what it is like to not be able to be there when the end is near~~

Touching write,
M

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
4 posted 2011-01-29 12:49 PM


this is heartwrenching....so sad but wonderful tribute to your grandmother

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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