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faithmairee
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Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-27 10:53 AM



spring is my favorite time of year
i see flowering trees and bumble bees
butterflies show up most everywhere
i want to shout outloud that spring is here

just to stand beneath a waterfall
and feel the water rolling off of me
i feel close to God, man and nature
with all three i am in harmony

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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Louisiana/America
1 posted 2011-01-27 04:01 PM


Sounds like a winner to me also, Faith. I just love springtime with all the ticks and ants and chiggers and mosquitoes and hurricanes and tornadoes and floods and allergies and . . ., Damn, I'm worn out praising springtime, you have to carry on what you've already started in your well-constructed and from the heart poem.

Oh, I forgot. Sunburn. Gotta love it. Just having a bit of fun.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2011-01-27 06:37 PM


My thoughts are wandering to planting a garden these days too--a hard freeze killed my ficus tree in the front yard, and it's so dreary to look at it. I'll replace with with something after carnival.

I think it will look just dandy covered in drippy gaudy mardi gras beads.

We gotta do what we gotta do to get through.

Enjoyed the inspiration.

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
3 posted 2011-01-27 08:00 PM


I'm surrounded by snow but dreaming of spring!
enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
4 posted 2011-01-28 01:41 PM


thnnk you all for reading and responding to my spring poem...we've had one of the coldest winters ever here in the south so i am looking ever so much for spring to hurry itself along...

i enjoyed reading your wonderful remarks...

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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