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faithmairee
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0 posted 2011-01-26 06:55 PM



prove me weak
or prove me strong
it will not matter
once i'm gone

prove me right
or prove me wrong
don't wait to love me
'till i'm gone

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
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1 posted 2011-01-26 07:09 PM


Laying down the gauntlet, are ye, M'Lady?

Don't speak to me as a cur,
Don't mince your words, don't slur.
I know your strength, yes I do,
Faith, your name like French fondue.

When you're right you are right,
Just ask me, your one true knight.
I speak softly in your ear,
What I whisper brings you cheer.


~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

faithmairee
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2 posted 2011-01-26 07:15 PM


wow...you just blew me away with that one...you're awesome, JerryPat

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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3 posted 2011-01-27 12:42 PM


Good point.
I really enjoyed the read.

Eric

Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself!

faithmairee
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4 posted 2011-01-27 10:19 AM


Thanks much, Eric!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
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5 posted 2011-01-27 01:27 PM


excellent commentary on living life...are you available for eulogies? :}
faithmairee
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6 posted 2011-01-27 08:27 PM


thanks much...eulogies?  well, i've only written one...Ha! i just posted it. thanks for the lovely comment!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lorraine Deane
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since 2011-01-29
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7 posted 2011-01-29 01:20 AM


Too true. Short but very sweet.
Marchmadness
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8 posted 2011-01-29 01:50 AM


Right to the point, faith. Enjoyed.
                               Ida

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2011-01-29 05:52 AM


I totally agree, Faith.

M

faithmairee
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10 posted 2011-01-29 12:45 PM


Welcome aboard Lorraine...thank you and M and Ida for your lovely responses

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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