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Open Poetry #47

before the fall

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-26 06:27 PM

they say pride comes
before the fall
who will be there for you
if there is anyone at all
surely things can not go on
as they have done all along
where tyrants reign and
justice is merely feigned

don your armor and
prepare your swords
for the things i speak
are not merely words
i challenge you to fight the war
the dawn is coming and
soon you will see
your cruelty will no
longer be endured

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-26 06:31 PM

Finally, a poem that is a poem. Some days it is difficult here in the blue room. Shouldn't complain, at least publicly I guess.

Enjoyed the challenge poem. Take it to the hateful one and show no mercy . . .

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-01-26 06:35 PM

you do me honor with your wonderful words, JerryPat...thank you so much

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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