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Open Poetry #47

False Hopes/ Fake Dreams

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-01-26 05:57 PM

False Hopes / Fake Dreams

I cry
while I scream
wondering if my heart
is following
false hopes
and fake dreams.

JamesLee
26January
2011

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-01-26 06:20 PM

i sure know how this feels...you said a lot in very few words...love your poem

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2011-01-26 08:32 PM

I agree with faithmarie, I can really feel this one.
Kat >^..^<

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2011-01-27 12:31 PM

Does make one wonder.
Excellent James!

Eric

Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself!

amk377
Member

since 2009-08-11

Posts 58
South Carolina

4 posted 2011-01-29 08:57 AM

Nice James, in a few words you capture what most of us can not in many! Thanks for the read...

"we have but a moment...only one moment"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2011-01-30 06:31 PM

Hmm....usually my brain steps in before I get to that point. I'm not sure if thats a good or bad thing

Enjoyed.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2011-01-30 06:41 PM

don't we all ?!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2011-01-30 07:48 PM

Thank you faithmairee, katahdin, ethome, amk377, sinfully innocent and secondhanddreampoet for the wonderful responses....James

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2011-02-02 09:01 AM

Sigh. I think we all wonder....

GG

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