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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest

0 posted 2011-01-26 01:50 PM



         




My Life with Spasms

My life in the game of spasms is like any game we play

I wake up in the morning and I always start to pray

Will the game I choose to play be easy for a toddler?

Or will that game I chose to play make my spasms tauter?


When we play a game of baseball we always want to score

But in the game of spasms we might just be too sore

It does not really matter if I win or lose the game

As long as we can walk away and always feel the same


In my game of spasms, I always feel this way 

Tomorrow I might win the game, it’s just another day


In my game of spasms I will listen to my team

They know about my spasms and help with self-esteem!



Now football season has arrived, the stadium is full

And when I sit down in the stand my spasms start to pull

But as I watch the quarterback running to the goal

My spasms are relaxing, I want to rock and roll



In my life of spasms the game is never done

I know that by tomorrow I'll make a touchdown or home-run

'Cause everyday is different in all the games we play

And in my life of spasms I just pray I’ll be okay!



To all who suffer with me

Please don’t ever be afraid

Because I know that someday 

We'll be leading the parade




I do the MS Walk everyday!!

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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
1 posted 2011-01-26 02:17 PM


This is an awesome poem. Never heard of the game of spasms. It sounds interesting though.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060
White Birch Forest
2 posted 2011-01-26 02:29 PM


It is not interesting; it is very painful!!

Marti

I do the <font color=FF6600><b>MS Wall</b><font color=blue>everyday!!

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
3 posted 2011-01-27 02:12 AM



This word story is interesting but sad.
The picture tells me you are living with anguish. The spasms crossing your face and causing pain within your body are showing in your words and choice of self portrait.  May you be blessed with healing soon. latearrival


ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2011-01-27 09:10 AM


Muscle spasms are a hateful painful thing.
Worse than a break most times. The pain is more acute and sharp.
Take your breath away most times.

Good poem describing how you cope with it all.

Eric

Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2011-01-27 10:41 AM


Marti, I am so blessed with such health and energy, and I have said so many times to so many people that I WISH I could cut off huge chunks of my health and/or energy and  hand them out to everyone who needs them (mine, I am sure, would just re-generate).  I would love to give you one of those chunks, but sadly, I don’t know how.  However, I will add you to my prayers instead.  

Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (01-27-2011 12:09 PM).]

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada
6 posted 2011-01-27 10:54 AM


..indeed, one's experience with spasms
turned into song..well done..have you tried
calcium with vitamin D..>>spiros

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