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Just spin |
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gdcod3player Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70California |
Watching you but nothings on My heart skipped for a minute Give me all my hopes for one lost door Let me find my words flying around I heard you crying out loud The lost words are for a loser I seem to smile even though your right I want to be a mile high But my heart keeps me coming down Keeping me from doing everything right Let you out of my dream You keep destroying me I thought i would never forget the past Let me understand the reason you went away Let me find a way to call your name Was it worth your last laugh? The world just has to spin Lets burn this bridge that we built for so long I hope there was nothing on its way Let my body be sent free Then i realized there is nothing i need You were the only person to set me strait I want to take turns Finding the difference between me and you Let me find a new hope Girl you were the only one i know |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ouch...you've described some real pain in this one...last line was a show-stopper...nice write |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
I could feel the pain in these words. I know these feelings oh so well. I enjoyed the read!!! When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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