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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
pensiration is the ink of the mind that glorious sub-strata of the soul emoting, sharing, and ultimately caring the whys of the how’s and the how’s of the whys pulsating, palpitating, pounding to the rhythm of idea-laden dreamscapes racing across the mind’s titillating tundra like speedsters scuttling over salt flats pristine perspiration and inspiration forged into one commiserating commensurately, yet individually |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love it! Initially I thought your delightful word came from pen and inspiration and decided for myself that perspiration would fit too - then I discovered that that was what you meant anyway. Perhaps you didn't mean the pen bit, but that fits too - perspiration and inspiration bonded with the pen. Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
actually, ms Owl, you are one hundred per cent correct...I realized that the closing lines might blur the image a little, but I am glad you stuck with it and understood it as was intended...thank you so very much |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~~~what Diana said  M |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is really wonderful...WOW...i love every word of it...gawd, you're good! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You've painted quite a landscape here. The diversity is what makes it for me. As always, I come away smiling after reading you.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You have a superb writing vocabulary Steaven. Love the idea of this title and how you expand the feeling. Good work as usual my friend. Eric Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ms M, right back at ‘ya Faith, it is hard to be humble when I read your comments (could you right me a few more?) …thank youBlues, thank you for the depth of your comment…made me go back and read it myself…wasn’t sure how diverse I had been…glad to help you smile Eric, thank you for the generous remarks…in all honesty, vocabulary ratings…well, I must give my mother credit for that…she convinced me long ago that you could tell smart people by the words they use…and being smart was my mother’s mantra for her children…still trying to be so, for her... |
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