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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
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Florida, USA

0 posted 2011-01-25 07:27 PM


Another poem I wrote for a picture prompt contest.
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Me and my love
were walking through the
garden one night
It was lit up
by the light
of the moon
Then all of a sudden
the lights started
to magically come on
by themselves
Little fairies
flying all around
In the moment
we started to kiss
A moment
that will last forever
Until our dying day

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-01-25 07:48 PM


this is really romantic and fits the picture perfectly...very enjoyable


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
2 posted 2011-01-25 07:50 PM


Thank you for the comment Faith!!! That is just what I thought of when I saw this picture.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
3 posted 2011-01-25 07:59 PM


Quite a magical moment in time was the gist of this poem. Somehow I could feel the electricity in the air moments before that first kiss. Gotta love it.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-01-25 09:37 PM


to quote a gumpism...pretty is as pretty does...enjoyed your lovely write
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