navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » The Wind and I
Open Poetry #47
Post A Reply Post New Topic The Wind and I Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-01-25 04:12 PM



The umbrella slightly folded
Under the rainfall
Hands traded signs

He took her hands off the cement
Where each point of her tip
Left a little indent

There was a slight scratch
Along the left corner of her leg
An uneven bridge
From the bottom of her feet
To the top of her cheeks

She was a bit hunched over
A bit uneasy
But the wind saw a woman of the night

As it grazed around the corner of the stores
She felt it suddenly touch her
Breezing in and out
Of her white tank-top

With his hand inside hers
The wind watching over her
As if she was engraved in the sky
With strands of her hair
Weaving through the clouds.

© Copyright 2011 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
1 posted 2011-01-25 07:21 PM


This is an awesome poem. I loved the imagery. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2011-01-26 02:37 PM


Happy you enjoyed the imagery, Doctors...hope all is well

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2011-01-26 05:54 PM


Enjoyed...James
Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
4 posted 2011-01-27 12:12 PM


Thanks, James..hope all is well

Cheers

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » The Wind and I

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary