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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2011-01-24 07:35 PM



In every heart there lives a need-
To hear, to be, to do-
I think I know what drives me on
I wonder friend do you?

I need to hear the wild geese cry-
The lonely timber wolves-
The mustangs ranging free and wide
The thunder of their hooves.

I need to feel the trade winds blow
A ladies sweet caress-
Upon the face of wanderers-
Which will not let them rest.

I need to see a bloody sun
Descend into the sea-
And lie beneath a starry sky
Which seems to beckon me.

If you can track a timber wolf
Upon a rocky crest-
Perhaps you'll find the path I leave-
As I am heading west.

If you can chart the wild goose' path
Or map the Ocean streams-
Perhaps indeed you'd follow me-
To conquests in my dreams

If you may know the pachyderm
And where his bones might lie?
Perhaps in time you'll know in fact
The place I'll go to die.

I want no pomp, nor floral sprays
When I lay down to rest-
I want to die with gun in hand
And facing t'ward the west.

That my last sight before I die
Would be the setting sun-
Perhaps I'll hear the nighthawk cry
"At last his race is run."


© Copyright 2011 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2011-01-24 09:55 PM


Nice work in the mood and style of the cowboy poet. Ride on. Chase the dream even when it has been caught, there is always more.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2011-01-25 11:40 AM


This is absolutely exquisite, John.  I like it even more than the Moon one.  This is my new favourite of yours, with the possible exception of some of your earlier horsy ones.  I absolutely relate to it all (except, of course, the lady's sweet caress! - and also the gun, but I understand about both).  

Owl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2011-01-25 11:50 AM


I'm with Owl on this one. You stum a sad tune on the ole heartstrings.
Lori

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