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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2011-01-24 05:59 PM






Still Winds

There was no wind
as prairie chickens quickly dispersed
having come to the newly formed pond
to drink.

Sunlight plays lovingly
upon snow and ice,
as in comfort of down and fur
one can believe this is but sand
on a deserted beached day.

The trees will soon rot at their roots,
falling over in shy of disappear,
feeding new life that will
evolve
as spring waters gather from their natural runs,
and pool, here,
where I come

to sit, in all seasons
to listen to the wind
even when there isn’t any.

~*~

(c) KRJ
12-26-02


© Copyright 2011 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
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1 posted 2011-01-24 06:32 PM


..how lovely, Sunshine,so very lyric..>spiros
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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2 posted 2011-01-24 09:20 PM


another beautifully painted piece of your unmistakable art
Lori

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
3 posted 2011-01-24 09:28 PM


simply beautiful...love your ending line...it's perfect

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
4 posted 2011-01-24 09:46 PM


This is such a beautiful picture you painted with these words. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
5 posted 2011-01-24 10:00 PM


You reach out to each individual reader and touch them with your own special way. Nicely done.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

AlCowie
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since 2011-05-13
Posts 92
London, UK
6 posted 2011-05-16 11:57 AM


A painting on a canvas to interpret, thoughts of now and thoughts of soon, beauty and nature, loved it.
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