Mice Wars Episode I: The Mice Mence

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Open Poetry #47

Mice Wars Episode I: The Mice Mence

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

0 posted 2011-01-24 02:26 PM

It is a battle
Of good verses evil
Mice verses Cats
I wonder who will win
Such a battle

The mice evade the cat territory
While the cat sleeps away
They plan a way
That the cat will go down
And never forget the mice rule today

They take little lightsabers
And cut the cats hair off
As quietly as possible
So the cat won't wake
And make mice pie

Then they trade out the cats food
And replace it with the dogs
After they finish with that
They pour liquor for the cat to drink
Instead of water

For the final attack of the sleeping cat
The mice tie the cats tail
To the door
So if anybody shuts it the cat will feel it
And the mice will have had victory at last

But little did the mice know
That the cat could sense what they did
And when the mice went to hide
The cat undid evething
Everything that they had done

The cat knocked the liquor on the floor
Poured out the dogs food in a planter
Cut the string off his tail with his claw
And said I shall live another day
You lose mice. The only thing I lost was my fur

The mice come out of hiding and say
We will fight you another day cat
We will get our victory
Us mice do not give up
And they returned to their hole in the wall
To plan another attack

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

always4real
Junior Member

since 2011-01-22

Posts 31
A yankee that lives in NC

1 posted 2011-01-24 03:48 PM

My cat and even my dogs loved this!
Very visual, I could see the mice running and trying to get their revenge...very nice!
Thank you

"Happiness is a state of your own mind!"

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

2 posted 2011-01-24 05:06 PM

Thank you!!! I am glad you liked.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-01-24 08:49 PM

very entertaining...i enjoyed the read

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

4 posted 2011-01-24 09:45 PM

Thank you for your comment Faith! I did it so everybody could be entertained.

I am glad it meet that purpose for you.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

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