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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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0 posted 2011-01-23 10:15 PM



Yesterdays
Reverberate through the years
like an echo,
somewhat hollow and far away.
Yet they dance in the moonlight of life
to a song called memory.
                
                      Ida

© Copyright 2011 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2011-01-23 10:39 PM


Memory can be a good thing, it is all about how is is remembered. Nice, thought-provoking piece of work.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
2 posted 2011-01-23 10:41 PM


Ida-What a beautiful poem!  I love how you said so much in so few words.  Wonderful work, Ida!

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2011-01-23 11:00 PM


Thank you, Jerry.
               Ida

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2011-01-23 11:01 PM


Always enjoy your comments, faith.
                               Ida

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2011-01-23 11:41 PM


The moonlight sheds so much, so beautifully.

Your poetry has a style all it's own.

Love this~

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2011-01-24 12:14 PM


Yes, they do, and this is a wonderful way to describe them.

Eric

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2011-01-25 08:31 AM


How'd I overlook this gem? Everybody beat me to all the good cooments so I 'll just say DITTO THAT for me!
Lori

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2011-01-25 08:46 AM


Ah, the Moon...

what magic is bestows!




Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
9 posted 2011-01-26 12:13 PM


Oh, yes, Ida, that song called Memory plays and plays again.  I think I'm now tired of it now! Well said.

Helen


steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

10 posted 2011-01-26 12:43 PM


...now that's imagery...nicer than nicely done
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
11 posted 2011-01-26 12:48 PM


Ye-ster-days are made of this . . .
Ye-ster-days are made of this . . .

Owl

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
12 posted 2011-01-27 01:57 AM


Yesterdays are good when the memory brings back smiles and are shared with our todays.  emjoyed this. latearrival
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