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always4real
Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31
A yankee that lives in NC

0 posted 2011-01-23 08:06 AM


For many years
I took care of my senior patients
Days were filled with
Stories of times before

From WWII to the Flu of 1918
Stories were told as if it were today
Many senior children believe it is.
My special children…

We are told to never get attached
There is only one fate…

After spending many days
Seeing the sunrise and the sunset together
Or even
Sharing our hopes and dreams
How is one to not?

My dear sweet friends
Hiram, Polly, Helen, Myrtle, Violet…
There is only one fate…

Thank you for the wonderful memories…
I have learned so much from you…

"Happiness is a state of your own mind!"

© Copyright 2011 Rachel M. Thompson - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-23 08:36 AM


"We are told to never get attached
There is only one fate…"

I, too, believe this is just nonsense. I would give much to be able to bask for a while in the memories of the greatest generation ever as they recount the reality that created my own today.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

amk377
Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58
South Carolina
2 posted 2011-01-23 09:17 AM


I enjoy reading about your adventures with your senior friends...your stories always make me smile. To see it in writing though is a true delight...

Love ya girl!

Amy

"we have but a moment...only one moment"

JerryPat
Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
3 posted 2011-01-23 10:30 AM


It takes a special kind of person to befriend these people of age.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die.  ~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2011-01-24 03:29 PM


What an amazing and sensitive poem, always4real. You are truly an angel.
                              Ida

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-01-24 11:29 PM


I love what you're saying here and how you said it...reminds me of listening to my grandfather talk about WWI and General John "Blackjack" Pershing and how his eyes lit up with pride when he mentioned his name...thank you for sharing this jewel of a write
always4real
Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31
A yankee that lives in NC
6 posted 2011-01-29 02:24 PM


Thank you for reading!
I worked with the elderly for 16 years. I loved my time with my friends. We truly can learn a lot from them! They say that history repeats itself...who not to listen to than the older generations

"Happiness is a state of your own mind!"

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