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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-22 07:32 PM



loving the wrong man
is what i do best-
the distant man
the man already taken
the forbidden one
who can't quite
get it (whatever
it is)
right at home

and you (with all
of your charms)
i'll probably end up
disliking you too
after i have gotten
all of the love
that i can get (although
i can't even imagine
that now) as we stand here
puffing on our cigarettes
alone for the very
first time
making polite conversation
and sharing
a few good stares

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

© Copyright 2011 Faith Elizabeth Brigham - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2011-01-22 07:33 PM


Hah. Those stares. That look. A gentle touch. A smile. First kiss and Katie bar the door.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

faithmairee
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Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
2 posted 2011-01-22 07:38 PM


Ha! I KNOW that's right!  I used to get so wrapped up in all the romance it wasn't funny.  

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
3 posted 2011-01-23 08:38 AM


Awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
4 posted 2011-01-23 09:09 AM


ha. Don't you hate how "wrong men" are so exciting? Enjoyed.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

faithmairee
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Poe Haven, USA
5 posted 2011-01-23 11:14 AM


XGarapanX-Thank you.  You made my heart smile.

Trina-Yep, I do.  Glad you enjoyed my poem


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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