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always4real
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since 2011-01-22
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A yankee that lives in NC

0 posted 2011-01-22 02:39 PM


Are you ready?
Put on your best dress
Fix your face
Hide the truth
Smile and say your fine

Everyone should know
But no one does
The devil is true
Bought and paid
The show must go on...

"Happiness is a state of your own mind!"

© Copyright 2011 Rachel M. Thompson - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2011-01-22 04:52 PM


Sad but true. Thought provoking first post.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2011-01-22 06:14 PM


welcome...very interesting first offering...enjoyed
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2011-01-22 06:20 PM


Rachel, this sounds like a sad but true
tale. One of the realities of poetry?
Is that we never know if some writings are
fact, or fiction. Sorry to say, yours sounds
real enough. So that makes for good writing,
especially if it is fiction.

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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
4 posted 2011-01-22 07:14 PM


Taking fraudulence into the glaring sun of truth and meaning. Happens each and every day. Welcome.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

always4real
Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31
A yankee that lives in NC
5 posted 2011-01-22 09:08 PM


Thank you for all the replies....unfortunately it is based on truth.

Sunshine thank you so much for the special email

"Happiness is a state of your own mind!"

amk377
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since 2009-08-11
Posts 58
South Carolina
6 posted 2011-01-23 09:42 AM


Rachel,

This speaks volumes! Your ability to so easily put your emotions into words come across effortlessly. I am in awe of how strong you are both emotionally as well as spiritually.

Amy

"we have but a moment...only one moment"

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