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Battle Weary |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Battle weary Too tired Uninspired I retreat Defeated To my fate Burning Dreams At the stake (repost) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Well written, Lori . . . but please don't! Smiles. Owl |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
It happens. You seem to be putting them out okay though. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
short but powerful poem...much said in so few words (the mark of a great poet imo)...love your work, Lori  Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Burning Dreams at the Stake"...now that is a cool visual...this one addresses the senses on so many levels...nice one |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Like a refreshing punch in the eye. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Ah, sometimes we just need to recharge our "batteries"- Slow and steady wins the war?  Lovely.-Trina |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Short and concise~ yep, know that feeling. |
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