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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
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Florida, USA

0 posted 2011-01-22 12:02 PM



Written on July 22, 2007

I stare at you from a distance
Daydreaming you are near
I can feel your arms around me
And lips so near my cheek

I know you don't notice me
But I can't help but notice you
I can't stop looking
I just can't stop looking

I love the way you smile
I love it when your eyes sparkle
I wish I could tell you that
But I know you might be with another

I wish I could have you
All to myself
I would love you forever and always
I would even bleed to love you

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-01-22 12:32 PM


Sounds like you got a bad case of it...hope you get your "cure" soon.
Lori

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
2 posted 2011-01-22 07:02 PM


Thank you for your comment. At one time I did have a bad case of something but now I am over it. LOL

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
3 posted 2011-01-22 07:16 PM


"Bleed to love you."

Thaat comes after about the second argument, and when you find out he doesn't mind hitting a woman.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
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4 posted 2011-01-22 07:18 PM


Interesting thought but not always. That is like another way of saying I would die for you.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
5 posted 2011-01-22 07:22 PM


very nicely expressed and so romantic...i sure know what that yearning is like...i just posted a similar one..loved yours!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Starcitta
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since 2011-01-21
Posts 18
WY, USA
6 posted 2011-01-22 09:32 PM


i loved it, nd i definitly know what its like to wanna die for someone...but ofcourse alot of they don' realize the longing in ones heart, anyways it's really nice keep it up

Amor Y Lagrimas

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
7 posted 2011-01-23 08:54 AM


A terrible feeling well described.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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