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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2011-01-21 11:17 PM


There's a word I fear is all too often used.
And sadly, for the word is oft abused.
It holds the key to any human's heart,
And is redundant in poetic art.

I'd like an explanation, if you please-
How four small letters brings one to his knees,
By now you know just what I'm speaking of,
The word in mind is what we all call "love".

"I love you" comes so easy to the tongue-
And often said in haste when we are young.
Yet years cannot erase it from the page-
Perhaps it is more painful as we age.

I'd like to do an edit on my mind-
And search each cranny, try my best to find...
Each instance where that word has played a part,
And carefully delete "love' from my heart.

Aghast, you gaze in shock at what I've said-
You have romantic notions in your head...
Of all the heartaches that I've had, maybe more than most-
To each disaster love has played the host.


[This message has been edited by Gunslinger (01-22-2011 03:56 PM).]

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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
1 posted 2011-01-22 12:00 PM


Awesome poem here. Shows that with love comes heartache.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
2 posted 2011-01-22 11:12 AM


Yes. This is so sad, but true.
Thanks,
Melton

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2011-01-22 11:52 AM


you handle heartache like I imagine you would a six shooter...with dead on accuracy.
Lori

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
4 posted 2011-01-23 08:43 AM


Kicking and screaming helps some.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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