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Open Poetry #47

Tanka..for you

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2011-01-21 07:35 PM

you are
the lady yet to arrive
my body awaits
it will transform into flowers
other times I'll be a tree
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..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony;
reaching into the poet's heart
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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-01-21 07:50 PM

Oh, great Grins!
Keep that promise, Sir!

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2011-01-21 08:23 PM

Beautiful little piece, Spiros.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

3 posted 2011-01-21 10:37 PM

Awesomely beautiful piece. Always keep that promise.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2011-01-22 02:57 AM

Lovely. Always a pleasure.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

5 posted 2011-01-22 09:34 AM

yah sue levende beautiful poem.

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

6 posted 2011-01-22 10:43 AM

..Karilea. XGX, TDA32, Trina, and mikeandrew
..>>thank you much for reading my poem; i
certainly appreciate your comments..>spiros

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-01-22 11:10 AM

I agree it is a beauty!
Lori

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

8 posted 2011-01-23 01:05 AM

..thanks Lori..!

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