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steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2011-01-21 03:55 PM

un-emancipated
my eyes behold the beauty
of a soft smile serenely set

as Wisdom rehearses
“like apples of gold
in pictures of silver”

fitly spoken
like the eye-dances
that encase the mind

un-free to proclaim liberty
to decipher the depths
that meanings bring

when beholding simplicity
while unmasking reality
un-emancipated...

...yet free

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-01-21 04:04 PM

This is beautiful Steaven, very much enjoyed
Lori

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-01-21 04:53 PM

You spoke to the beauty with a language that never dies . . . Love . . .

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-01-21 05:03 PM

You're on a roll, Steaven. Turning out some fine writing.
Ida

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-01-21 05:38 PM

Lori, thank you…so very glad you enjoyed…I am honored by your comment

JerryP, a very kind and generous review…thank you so much

Ida, wow…you caught me off guard…thank you, thank you (and did I say thank you?)

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2011-01-22 12:50 PM

Freely written within the confines of beauty and excellence, as always.

Owl

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2011-01-22 02:13 PM

I love this~~ it speaks to me

M

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2011-01-22 06:00 PM

Owl, my soul, you truly make me feel more important than I ought...thank you for the kind remarks

miss M, am glad you found this enjoyable and that it spoke to you...thank you for reading and commenting

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

8 posted 2011-01-22 06:53 PM

very powerful delivery on this one...great poem

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2011-01-23 02:44 AM

Steaven if you think that I make you feel more important than you ought to feel, may I suggest that you read the poetry of Steavenr - that will change your mind! Smiles.

Owl

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

10 posted 2011-01-23 08:46 AM

Undoubtedly exquisite.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

11 posted 2011-01-23 08:54 AM

Lovely. You always paint such beauty with your words. Enjoyed.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2011-01-23 11:41 AM

It's great to see your muse is alive and well.

Loving your poetry, steavenr~

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