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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
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Florida, USA

0 posted 2011-01-21 12:52 PM


Written August 3, 2007


Look at the light
Shining over the water
From the clear, full moon

The way it caresses
The crashing waves
Of the ocean

The way it gives
The boats at sea
Light to travel by

And how it lights
The beach
For lovers to walk on
Hand in hand
Under
The clear, full moon

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-01-21 01:05 PM


wow...this is wonderful...love the imagery and romantic tone...i love it!

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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2 posted 2011-01-21 01:10 PM


Thank you faith. It was written for love birds.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
3 posted 2011-01-21 01:26 PM


Well, it may have been written for loved birds, but this old widowed guy thought it was pretty nice too. Of course, there were times I was part of a love bird situation.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

steavenr
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4 posted 2011-01-21 02:22 PM


this write is as perfect example of how poetry paints such beautiful images on the canvasses of the reader's mind...so well done
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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5 posted 2011-01-21 10:34 PM


Thank you Jerry and steavenr for your comments. I am glad you like it and it brought back memories.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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