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Don't Read This Poem
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Don't Read This Poem |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Just let your eyes Slip softly over My smile Play catch The twinkle in my eye Laugh your way along my lines Linger Spend some time With me Let me touch you Wherever You please Don’t JUST Read This Poem (repost) [This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (01-22-2011 11:43 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So soft and gentle, hard not to read over and over. Nice~ |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Don't quite get the don't read this poem, Lori, but I certainly get the poem. Yup. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Blues! I'm glad you liked it. ------------------------------------------ Jerry? You get it but you don't get it? Now I don't get you...you have me bamboozled. And I try to avoid Bam in my booze as it tends to make me cornfused. Lori |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
OK OK Then I'll just look at the pictures! Aw couldn't help it, had to read it and it's a clever little angle that all can appreciate. I read it, now I suppose that means I'm not gonna get my hugs and kisses, I just couldn't help myself.....what can a guy do? I didn't just read it I thunk bout it too...pouting.... Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Oh Eric, I hate to see you feeling this way   Better? Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
had to read it, of course and i thoroughtly enjoyed it...wonderful poem  Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I read AND enjoyed. So, I followed the instructions.  -Trina |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
faith & Trina- glad you enjoyed! |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I said this, "Don't quite get the don't read this poem, Lori, but I certainly get the poem. Yup." Take another look at what I wrote, Lori. I said that I didn't "get" the part about not reading the poem, but after I read the poem I "got" what you were writing the poem about. Seems pretty self explanatory to moi. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep! All Better! Eric Great poem too two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You don't say "don't" to a poet.  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for setting me straight Jerry- Sorry I was so dense. __________________________________________ Glad to hear it Eric. Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sunshine- You don't? |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the only thing more difficult than not reading this would be not reacting to it (he says, as he turns his head, raises his eyebrows and blushes and he is heard to softly say,"wow") |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Blushing? wow! I'll take that as a compliment! Thanks Steaven! Lori |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Don't read this reply ... until I've slipped my eyes over your smile played catch with your twinkle spent some time laughing with your linger and OH! MY!! Don't touch me there! Okay ... you can read it now Enjoyed If you continue to think what you have always thought you will continue to get what you have always got! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ha! Rex that was great! what a wonderful response. Thanks for playing with me! Lori |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
I hear you laugh, though I am mostly deaf. I feel your lines, for they display to me in Braille. Thank you for letting me ... I would have been embarrassed to ask. (This is true as I use a screne reader called Jaws for windows and as I type I read the Braille display). |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sweet Daddy! How kind of you to dig up this poem and I'm delighted you enjoyed it and I thank you very much for telling me! Lori |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Great poem Lori. The title pulls you in. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool girlie |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
perfect title, very clever yann |
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