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Open Poetry #47

The Queen of Thorns

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2011-01-20 07:35 AM

The queen sits on her throne
a chair of shambles
of sticks and twigs
all the Lord could give

A fight for freedom
from violent king
jealous untrusting
the root of the thing

Her robe of borrowed cloth, lace and fur
destination and kingdom, unknown for sure

and where she goes
is where she spent
her mind for peace
she goes
she went

Control she has
her kingdom traveling
this woman, this knave
a sorrowful lass

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-01-20 08:24 AM

I can relate to this. I think it says alot. I liked it.
Lori

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2011-01-20 12:05 PM

Sometimes the queen just has to get out.

Nicely done!

Eric

two maggots were fighting in dead earnest!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-01-20 02:47 PM

man...I wish I could say that I completely understood this...but, I don't have to understand it to love it completely...great write

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2011-01-20 03:39 PM

I'm with Steavenr on this. Enjoyed.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2011-01-20 04:28 PM

..>>much enjoyed..>>spiros

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