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Warmth and Assurance
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Warmth and Assurance |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey 
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Your crystalline eyes remain frozen on mine.. our hands clasped, we embrace under covers. With our bodies appressed, our heart rates incline, we’ve always been passionate lovers… You embed your love deep into my bones, as I’m frenzied at once with your touch. This adoration won’t falter by sticks nor by stones, We admire this love way too much. Let‘s adjoin our hands, I’ll stay close by your side as we race down this timeline of life. A future with you is here, and implied, No matter our quarrels or strife. Envisioning love lasting years past the present, I’m enveloped in warmth and assurance, That no matter the miles, hardships, and unpleasants, your kiss is an expected occurrence. *Amber |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice flow to this Amber. Easily read and understood. Just my opinion but I think this last verse is classic! "Envisioning love lasting years past the present, I’m enveloped in warmth and assurance, That no matter the miles, hardships, and unpleasants, your kiss is an expected occurrence." Love that, should be in the wedding vows. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Oh, I agree with Eric!! Would make lovely wedding vows. Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey |
 Thank you! |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Nice wordplay here, Amberzlynnc. Would that we all had that feeling within us. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
That warmth and assurance is painted beautifully by your words. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Ohhhhhhhh, Amber ... Maybe I better stop reading you ... It's warm and more reassuring to me that you will ever know. Perhaps I'm less alone than I, at times, than I suppose I am. I have to go ... ... Thank you.. xoxoxox Mu |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Love described effortlessly. Nice! Thank you Amber |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, I really like this! What a delightful expectation! *S* |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
oh Awesome. That's all I can say, really. I adore reading you, every time! |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey |
Thank you everyone! :-) |
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