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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
Posts 487


0 posted 2011-01-19 07:11 PM



When they are sweet and warm.
Sometimes when there are cold
filled with jam of sweet raspberry
or bitter like a cherry.
I love chocolate chip they are
truly the best, all I could
think of were those sweet
little oasis. I wouldn't
mind oatmeal but the
raisins are too sour,
and ginger snap burns
my tongue. Now my cookies
are salty, plain and truly
hard to swallow. Maybe I
cast them aside or
maybe i was casted aside
I just know they are not
sweet like they use to
be. Even so I really do
love cookies....when i have
it with milk.

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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2011-01-19 07:13 PM


I relate.

~ Clones are people two ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-01-19 07:24 PM


Me too, except I haven't met a cookie I didn't like.
Lori

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2011-01-19 08:08 PM


I like ginger snaps, dipped in coffee

faithmairee
Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
4 posted 2011-01-19 09:36 PM


love those cookies myself...enjoyed your poem a lot

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
5 posted 2011-01-20 04:30 PM


Me and you both. I love oreos and chocolate chip cookies Enjoyed.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

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