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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2011-01-19 05:04 PM

not int’rested, as his eyes close in slumber
not int’rested at all as the whirl worlds by
careening through caverns of dream-laden sleep
waking to refrains of gentle cradlesongs
lost in the niches of a time-worn past
filled with caution, bursting with care

not int’rested, as his shoulders shrink in respite
not int’rested at all as eons turn toward nothing
painting the halls of mist-night visions
blackened reveries of a soul undone
absent in the abyss of long-sought memories
laden with caring, burdened with none

and feeling seeks dying as solace for concern
while int’rest eludes ere the soul’s flight’s begun

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-01-19 05:07 PM

wow...this is very deep but beautifully written as usual...it's my new favorite of your poems

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

2 posted 2011-01-19 05:19 PM

This is an truly deep and beautiful piece.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-01-19 05:38 PM

What a profound and thought provoking write,
Steavenr. One of my favorites of yours also.
Ida

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

4 posted 2011-01-20 04:28 AM

Fantastic poem great insights.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2011-01-20 06:25 AM

Absolute wonderful presentation Steaven.
Deep and thought stimulating.

Eric

two maggots were fighting in dead earnest!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-01-20 11:44 AM

Sadly, too many people are like that - beautifully expressed, Steaven.

Owl

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

7 posted 2011-01-20 03:56 PM

I'll echo whats been said. Always a pleasure.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

Lorraine Deane
New Member

since 2011-01-29

Posts 5
South Australia

8 posted 2011-01-29 01:47 AM

So very deep & meaningful.
A pleasure to read.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2011-01-29 05:28 AM

"lost in the niches of a time-worn past
filled with caution, bursting with care"

I think I feel this way so much lately~~

it's probably the same for all generations once they reach being "the elder"

Sometimes too much thinking can be dangerous

M

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

10 posted 2011-01-29 07:22 AM

..indeed, very serious poem today; well-penned; thanks..>>spiros

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