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Heartsleeve Arrived
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Heartsleeve Arrived |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Heartsleeve arrived in the sun smiling wearing her best come hither and matching jaunty heels She held her head high and her hips side to side as she taunted her way among the wanting She drank in their eyes along with the lies that made her fragile feel invincible LGR©1/19/11 |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
wow...this one packed a punch...powerful poem...you're really good, Lori! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Aw gee thanks faith! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Yes. I agree. This is like a pizza slap in the eye. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
XGarapanX-pepperoni? |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Nicely done, Lori. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh that masquerade works for some. It's a tough life sometimes, yet we find ways to maintain some self esteem and to cope. Usually learning all the while. Loved this! Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry and Eric- thanks for being here and liking it! Lori |
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