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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-01-18 11:44 AM





Unsympathetic say:

Nothing you can do
to stop them
they will just try again
another day
If they are determined
they will find a way
to die

Ignorant say:

An inevitable outcome
is less of a loss
They were crazy anyway

Obviously
they never lost
one of their own
that way

LGRĀ©1/18/11

© Copyright 2011 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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1 posted 2011-01-18 12:05 PM


Obviously.

~ Clones are people two ~

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
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2 posted 2011-01-18 02:28 PM


True. A lot of senseless things happen in this world today.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2011-01-18 03:16 PM


very true, we meet these people every day and as long as nothing invades their world, they wander through life, unblinking.
~
there are also those who wish to help, but have no answers

excellent piece Lori

OwlSA
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4 posted 2011-01-18 03:29 PM


It is very sad that so many people just simply don't care about how others feel.  If everybody did, just that one thing would make a huge difference to the world in macrocosm and in microcosm.

Very sad at the news, Lori.

Owl

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
5 posted 2011-01-18 05:38 PM


great write, Lori...much truth here

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

AlCowie
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since 2011-05-13
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London, UK
6 posted 2011-05-16 09:26 AM


Thought provoking thoughts...
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2011-05-16 09:30 AM


Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying yourself.
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