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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-01-17 01:31 PM

it would be more diffictult to consider
the model of you as a sporting mechanism
even with your do it quick disposetion
and how your curves handled my steering
which suggested you were designed for speed

but the sound of your high performance ignition
just before you took my eyes and hands on
and made them admire your fluid finish slowly
as if searching for the right buttons there
to open you up into full throttle acceleration

and I, never wanted to know how fast you were
when I was admiring your moistened upholstry
and the flavors of your skin seeping exotics
that scent you called temptation I think
was far more of a pleasure then just sliding

in and out of your almost free will confinment

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daark

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2011-01-17 01:46 PM

This is very beautifully written. My mind just went into gutter when I pictured this piece in my mind. I don't know if you were talking about a car or something else. LOL

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-01-17 02:37 PM

DA..how about a radio controlled jaguar that uses gutters as freeways? Thanks for the eyes and where your mind went.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2011-01-17 03:33 PM

Whew! Kickass.

~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-01-17 03:38 PM

thanks jp..

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-01-17 04:09 PM

"how your curves handled my steering" as usual, a very cool write

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2011-01-17 04:17 PM

Oh c'mon, gimmie that ice pack.

You makin steam here.

"and I, never wanted to know how fast you were
when I was admiring your moistened upholstry
and the flavors of your skin seeping exotics
that scent you called temptation I think
was far more of a pleasure then just sliding

in and out of your almost free will confinment"

Gulp! Almost choked.

Great writing that can't be denied.

Write on!!

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-01-17 05:29 PM

steavenr, thanks amigo

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et, thanks my friend

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

8 posted 2011-01-17 06:06 PM

haha...ok, my mind was in the gutter right along with DA

Always a pleasure.

-Trina
Life is nothing but a competition to be the criminal rather than the victim.
-Bertrand Russell

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

9 posted 2011-01-17 06:18 PM

smiled all the way through this one

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

10 posted 2011-01-17 08:42 PM

great write...enjoyed it much

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2011-01-17 10:13 PM

but the sound of your high performance ignition
just before you took my eyes and hands on
and made them admire your fluid finish slowly
as if searching for the right buttons there
to open you up into full throttle acceleration

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That's one way to rev it up!
Gotta love fast cars and dark strangers!!

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

12 posted 2011-01-17 11:52 PM

Ooh! And aah! And OMG you're talking about a Harley, right? Has to be.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

13 posted 2011-01-18 12:32 PM

"that scent you called temptation I think
was far more of a pleasure then just sliding

in and out of your almost free will confinment"

sigh Stranger darlin'
just
sigh

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

14 posted 2011-01-18 06:43 AM

ms sinz..thanks lady

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rex, thanks my friend

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ms faith, thank you ms

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babyblue..you always rev me babe

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garapan, thanks so much for the read

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lady1, your sighs are priceless, thanks ms

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