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Open Poetry #47

Awakened Slumber

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2011-01-16 10:35 PM

Kissing you good morning
With my arms wrapped tight around you
As your breath rolls down my neck
My chest feeling your heart beat,
In unison,
with the desire in my mind

Stroking your hair
as it lays perfectly
across your skin
Reveling in the moment,
of awakened slumber

Having you in peacefulness,
The way awakened dreams
are intended

My attention
is given solely,
to you

To bring life,
to your wanting needs

To bring caress,
to your enchanting ability

To bring emotion,
to your hidden,
awaiting desire,
.......for love

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2011-01-16 11:49 PM

This is such a romantic poem. This got me smiling.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2011-01-17 01:48 AM

This really cascades down the page with a romantic swirl that becomes quite hot at the end.
I think you've really accomplished your aim when it comes to affecting the reader.

Well done!

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-01-17 02:01 AM

beautifully romantic...very nice...indeed

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

4 posted 2011-01-19 11:59 AM

A very thoughtful piece.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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