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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2011-01-16 09:08 PM


I want to hear your voice
You don't want to hear mine
Im giving it all i got
I want to be your fool
Can i tell you why i love you like i do?
I guess you wont listen
Why do i want to keep my stand?
Do you like me lonely?
I dont want to stay home again
Let me get outside
Can i meet you tonight?
Everything's gunna be alright

Where is anywhere
When there is nothing real
Your heart has been locked up by another hand
Kill me in the beating sun
I want to hide and run

I know you see another boys eyes
The halos of a better day
The heart i have cant be free
You are the only one i want
The flowers are dying in my hand
I was sent home alone
Let this song tell my why i love you
I feel like a fool
Why do you treat me this way?

[This message has been edited by gdcod3player (01-16-2011 09:53 PM).]

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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
1 posted 2011-01-17 12:00 PM


I could feel the pain as I read these words. A story of love not returned.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


rad802
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since 2008-04-19
Posts 279
KY U.S.A.
2 posted 2011-01-17 10:18 AM


The flowers are dying in my hand
I like this line

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